"Many crucial flaws" of the draft law on civilian protection

What does the Legislative Council to the Prime Minister think about the draft law on civilian protection and the state of natural disaster? Although he mostly evaluates it positively, he admits that it has "many crucial flaws", which are both formal and substantive. There is advancement erstwhile it comes to developing a "good idea" for civilian protection - we read - but the paper inactive needs to be worked on. And this work will not be enough.